MisterPersonGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Friday Night Regular]

Short, but sweet, and to the point! The story's clever, the animation's completely functional, the music choices are Grade A... it's perfect! Don't think I'd want this movie any other way! Excellent work!

Kill3rman88 responds:

Thank you! Really appreciate it! :)

[WEEK TWO]

Immediately, I noticed that some of the lip-sync is EXTREMELY off, to the point where it was very distracting.

Speaking of voices, I can't make out a good chunk of the lines without multiple listens, and while that's only PARTLY because of the sloppy lip-sync, the main problem lies with the voice audio itself. Seriously, how many MILES away was your mouth from the microphone? Protip: you're not supposed to eat the damn thing, but you're not supposed to go 100 feet from it and WHISPER your lines, either.

Despite these crippling problems the movie has, it's still not without its funny moments: Girlfriend growing her boombox, Boyfriend realizing he's in over his head with the Spooky kids, Skelly kid dancin'... and others... were funkin' hilarious. Also, it looked nice. REALLY nice, even! Unfortunately, despite all these little charms, it's still a case of style over substance, biting off more than you can chew, etc.

In other words, it's better to slow your roll and plan the general outline of your movie firsthand, rather than just having a rough idea and adding a plethora of random stuff in it later, thinking that'll make it "better". While stuff like that makes it more interesting, it doesn't really make the final product any less hollow, and therein lies the main problem with your movie.

EggyDaxy responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I don't think I was being too away from the mic, in fact I would try to keep it as close as possible lol... Im just not a native English speaker and have a hard time articulating. For the sync being off I'd say it's a problem with how the editing program rendered it, it was ok when I checked it before but it evidently got fucked up. I understand my accent is a bit harsh, that's why I put subtitles on the YouTube upload. However this is newgrounds and you have every right to be confused! This is my first time voice acting in something, I'll get better as I go :)

[FridayNightFunkin: Boyfriend looses it #FunkinJamNG]

While the animation was pretty jank and blurry and all over the place, I can definitely tell you tried! A for effort! Also, Boyfriend's revelation was really funny!

ManicMinerBurns responds:

Thank you!!!!

[Satin panties animation]

The way they jiggle around like jello kinda gives me agida, but outside of that, this was short, sweet and to the point! Excellent job with the perspective changes, and good work overall!

chewie125 responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the criticism

[Friday night funkin Only a spoonful]

Object size is a little inconsistent, but other than that, it does its job as a funny meme animation. Good job!

TheComicFan responds:

thanks

[It's Rude to Stare]

Princess Backache is a new favorite character of mine now! I want more of her! In fact, I wish this was an ACTUAL visual novel that I could play!

Excellent work!

Drawsputin responds:

Hunter made a great character with tons of potential.

It's why I got so inspired to animated her. I too wish this was an actual visual novel. :3